ACADEMIC DISCUSSION SAMPLE - 5 out of 5 on mock TOEFLЧестно скажу, не то чтобы я горжусь этим piece. Серьезно я проделывала только reading & listening, чтобы получить второй модуль посложнее. Writing & speaking сделала быстро ‘просто чтобы’ и этот ответ я просто нашлепала, закончила раньше времени и пошла дальше, но как пример, думаю, будет полезно:
I would side with Kelly on this issue. Certainly, congestion-free roads and energy efficiency in cities are both important aspects, but there are significantly more pressing concerns the governments have been failing to tackle so far. A huge number of people in many countries still struggle to survive, are homeless or live in dilapidated housing - with these issues unaddressed, it seems inhumane to think about smart traffic lights. This way we would just make life more pleasant for the rich, while still ignoring those who leave beyond the poverty line. I am not even beginning to talk about crime rates in big cities. These issues are the foundation of a thriving community and as long as the foundation is not solid, we should not concern ourselves with 'the decorum' of energy-efficient buildings.
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