DAY 13 — Revise: Improve the Ideas
Revision is not grammar correction.
Revision means looking again at what you said.
Today, take your Day 12 paragraph.
Ask:
1. Is my main idea clear?
2. Does every sentence support it?
3. Where does the reader need more explanation?
4. Can I add a stronger example?
5. Is anything unnecessary?
6. Should any sentences change order?
Revision Challenge
Make at least three meaningful changes.
You may:
- add
- remove
- replace
- reorder
- explain
Important
A first draft answers:
What do I want to say?
Revision answers:
How can I say it more effectively?
Check
✅ I changed more than grammar.
✅ My second draft communicates my ideas better.
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